Meet the characters:
Ryder - female, human, teenager, short in height, long brown hair w/blue streaks, bright green eyes, smart, sassy, tough.
Ax - (short for Aximander), male, demon (but was once human before being sent to hell), as a demon he has no permanent form, thus he possesses humans. He's cunning, vindictive, but incredibly charismatic.
The conflict:
Ryder is a supernatural hunter (she hunts demons, monsters, evil baddies), but she has been possessed by the demon Ax, who has essentially bound himself to her...meaning no simple exorcism will release him. Ryder must find a way to break free of Ax while fighting for control of her own mind, body, and actions.
Check out Their abilities:
Ryder - as a hunter she is skilled in weapons, fighting, and supernatural knowledge/lore but does not have "supernatural or magical" abilities of her own.
Ax - can shift/shimmer (teleport anywhere, including hell) and has enhanced/heightened abilities (strength, speed, hearing)...when possessing someone these abilities are transferred into them while Ax resides within them.
The authors have plotted and toiled for many hours to create their unique flash fiction version of Ryder and Ax’s tale. Now you’ll all get to read them! Each author is hosted on one of the below blogger sites:
Two Chicks on Books - hosting G.P. Ching
Magical Urban Fantasy Reads - hosting Megan Duncan
Taking It One Book At A Time - hosting S.M.Reine
How to Outsmart a Demon
By K.A.Tucker
“All these demons and I can’t kill any
of them,” I muttered quietly as I trudged through a river of murky green liquid,
my sea green eyes darting from one moving shadow to the next.
Yes,
you can! No one will notice, Ryder.
Think of how easy it would be… Ax cooed. For five
days now, that damn leech of a demon had camped inside my mind - taunting me,
battling to dominate my will. I couldn’t shake him and it was getting really
annoying. “Stop talking!” I snapped. Too loud. I clamped my mouth shut and checked
the gloom for witnesses. None, it seemed. Not that they’d guess what was going
on in any case. They’d just suspect me of being a crazy
demon-in-a-human-body-visiting-Satan-in-Hell kind of girl. No one, including
the persistent Aximander, believed that a human could resist a demon’s full
possession. Miraculously, I had done
just that. Not without a constant fight, of course. I was now the freak show who
argued with herself in the streets. It was a peculiar sensation, sharing my
body with another being. Especially one as charming as Ax.
As if led by an invisible string, my
arm lifted up and over my shoulder, my hand grazing the handle of my exquisite samurai
sword. Such a beautiful, sharp weapon... Ax
purred. He was tempting me to attack a
demon. It was clear he didn’t want me to reach Satan for some reason. Gritting
my teeth, I forced my arm down to my side and marched further down the tunnel
until I reached a fork. “Which way?”
Right, Ax advised. So I went left. We reached another fork. Left, he said. So I did, knowing the cunning demon assumed I’d do the opposite
again. I plodded along, stepping over gnarly roots and wiping beads of sweat
off my brow. “Could this be any more stereotypical?” I whispered, my eyes
rolling over the dank, gloomy underground world. Hell was exactly as I had
expected it to be.
You’re the one who forced me into bringing
you here…
“You’re
the idiot who fused yourself to my bones! Even the High Priest’s exorcism can’t
peel you off.”
I told you how to reverse it, if you don’t
like it, Ax answered indignantly.
I
snorted. “Ya… kill myself.” I continued in silence for the next ten minutes, feeling
the glowing demon orbs bore into me as I walked. None came forward to greet me.
I wasn’t surprised. Ax was a Possessor
Demon. Average demons were wary of his kind.
We rounded a corner and the low, dark tunnel
suddenly opened up into a remarkably bright, cavernous room full of sculpted
stalagmites and burning torches. In seconds, I zoned in on the occupant – a
giant beast with horns protruding out of his forehead and dark, leathery skin.
Part human, part bull, part ugly. The
creature sat in an elaborate stone throne studying a glowing red crystal ball
in his clawed hand.
His golden eyes flickered over to me as
he inhaled deeply through a wide snout. “Aximander!” he boomed in a baritone
voice. “A female host this time… Interesting!”
I
opened my mouth but faltered, unsure of how to address the king of all evil.
Satan? Master? Did I kneel? No. Ax would never kneel for anyone.
Satan gestured me forward. “Well?”
“I
thought I’d try something different,” I finally said.
Oh, she feels different alright, Ax
murmured in a seductive, low tone.
I closed my eyes, fighting the urge to
shudder.
“Who is she? Besides some cute teenager with
blue hair,” Satan asked with curiosity.
“Her
name is Ryder,” I explained carefully, referring to myself in the third-person.
“She was a demon slayer.”
The
beast’s gigantic head tipped back as he bellowed with laughter, slapping his
knee. “How ironic! She’s now possessed by one!”
I
felt a smile stretch across my lips. “Yes, I thought that would amuse you.”
He’s going to figure it out and when he
does… Ax warned in a singsong voice.
I
ignored him. “She’s small but feisty. Put up a good fight.”
His
eyes rolled over my shoulder to the weapon strapped to my back, “I believe it.”
I
chuckled in mock amusement. “She swore she’d break free of me.”
Satan
chuckled along. “How? She’d have to kill me!”
She’d
have to…I instantly processed Satan’s words. Noooo! Ax cried out as I reached
back and whipped my sword from its sheath with Ax’s super-human speed. The
blade arched through the air and down in one fluid motion, cutting through Satan’s
flesh like softened butter. His severed head bounced off the throne’s arm
before hitting the ground.
And then suddenly I was back in my mother’s
living room… completely alone.
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This was such a great, creative idea! I loved the way K.A. Tucker took it. I'll have to go check out the rest of them now!
ReplyDeleteWhat fun! thanks for the post and some fun reads....funny how they are all so different.
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I love that you set your story in Hell! Ax is so perfectly smarmy. And Ryder killing Satan?! So awesome! I love what you did with this idea.
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I could feel the anticipation while reading this one! Lovin' it!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorites, out of the five. It's crazy how all of the stories are so different.
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This was an awesome series! I really enjoyed all the stories. Thanks again!
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These flash fiction competitions are so much fun to read - sometimes it's truly difficult to pick only one.
Oooh, first one I have read but I wish it were a whole book with a bit more meat. What fun characters, I can't say the ending was great. But otherwise I have a serious craving for more.
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